Day of reckoning

On Friday April 1st, I had my animatic shown to my peers and tutors at the National Gallery. It was generally well understood, with some helpful hints and tips given. Please feel free to tell me what you understand, or don't understand and what you think is happening in the film, as I want it to be unserstandable for the viewer. Leave comments below or on the Vimeo link

Transcriptions Animatic - First Draft from Karl Lawson on Vimeo.

I figure I'll let people watch first then post what my thoughts are and what I want people to get from it...

Enjoy